I Dont get it... sounds more like a looped background... has no bridges, melody, harmony, and its low... its not what i would generally call dubstep because its full of bass and while you have wobbles it sets an ambient industry kinda feel. kinda dark. whatever you do i suggest listening to a variety of artists and try to copy them and then when you master their works go off on your own
Fuck loops :P.
ive listened to almost all of your dubstep pieces and this by far has the new feel that ive been looking for in dubstep. as i sit here listening to the piece over and over as i write this i get more anticipated to hear the full thing... this sounds like it should come along great.
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dull.............. i dont know man but this sounds like a background and there should be some other melody playing
like the vocals that will be added (as described above) perhaps?
im your critic
use different kind of instrument in the begining build up it needs a nice lasting effect like a long tone withe huge accents so the feel of the rest of the song isn't different. the main tune isnt bad but i really like it at 52 with the slow down but a song like this needs especially this long needs less repeating and instead of multiple sections needs one long slower section an a mid build like at 1 44 which is perfectly placed. the drums dont feel toned enough. listen to any real market songs with crazy drums for ideas. i myself being a drummer already have ideas. effects aren't everything. the notes and the amount of echo used at 3 34 could have been manipulated better for better feel and sound. the end isn't strong though. a fade out is what people not creative enough use as an escape from thinking. even with one track playing at once there could be a strong finish. a song thats long also needs a creative finish to lock people in giving you 5 of 5 0r 10 of 10. nice 8 score from me. don't expect you to read all of this.
the beats are just not supportive.
something with different beats but the same instrument cant get a good rap. experimenting isnt good when your only experimenting with a couple instruments. experiment using complicated synths having it sound mediocre or average and have it get a 5 instead of 3 out of ten. experimenting is just another way of saying judge this critically to help me find new experiments.
p.s. ALL my songs are experiments.
ight thanks for the tip much respect
the opener grabbed my attention greatly. thats what you want and i liked :52 but there could at least be an added background before that and each section just seems so long with to many repeats. i understand what mood your trying for for this mood you need more melodies. this song though is more suited in a game than as a musical piece.
p.s. d.k. will kick YOUR ass :P
Well considering it is FROM DK, and it is a boss battle song, well it is designed for a game. It deffinately doesnt sound like this though, you probably wont even recognise it if u heard it :D Peace man, thanks for the review.
sure you have a bass chorus a melody a beat and special effects but the song has those same things through out the whole song. the only part that deserves credit is the part at 3:15. if your going to make it a 5 minute song i understand why youd use fill-ins but sadly those do nothing but make your song longer. listen to songs on this website (one person in particular which i cant quite remember uses 10 tracks in almost every part of his song the puts it down to for the key word.... suspense. those 4 periods even resemble more suspense than this song. no hard feelings but dont be lazy with fill ins. 10 tracks is hard to do but 5 of them where all backgrounds as a supportive branch. hope this helps you. i would like to see a redone version of this 10x better
Well i don't think i was to lazy. i just was trying to get a long song. but if you listen closely you find that there not a same part in the whole song that is more that 9 sec long.
i use garage band too and while ur better than me i still think ur drums could be 20 times better cmon an u know it. do u make ur own synths or use premade ones
i use premade ones, but i would use my own if my comp didn't run so slow when i did
your songs arent bad either
hmn quiet but good not sure if u hit off key for any reason but its fine by me
Huh, PM me at what time I hit off key.
Liked the song great work but uuuhhhhh whats with the extra 3 minutes of song at the end the blankness?
I have no idea.... it wasnt like that before i exported it...
Thanks anyway :)
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